Nice action, a little bit chaotic but with sprites its hard to avoid it.
Very nice work on the effects btw :)
Next time I hope you make it longer.
Thank you. Yeah I want to avoid the craziness. The next animation will deff be longer and better and will be more than just a random battle and use a little more imagination. Thanks for the review!
Nice work dude, I can definitely see a hint of Adventure Time animation style in there.
As you said the sound is a bit poop, but good poop :)
Keep it in mind when you do the next one :D
Very Nice beat, definitely felt like getting up and dancing to this one :)
I am glad you like it :D
Ok a good start but you need to give more thought to the sound of the lead and the general composition of this song.
The lead gets a bit too high and tinny in places and really makes it hard to listen to. Maybe try adding some Reverb, Delay or Chorus. Or all 3 lol
Also the general feel of the song is that it's a little bit disjointed and repetitive in places. Did you use a music scale for this ? Like Major, Minor ect. My way of doing things is to play a little simple tune that I like and then create a scale from it and stick to it.
Sorry if this seems like I'm being a bit mean but I am honestly trying to help you take your music to the next level. It's a good effort just bear in mind what I said and try to be a bit more adventurous with your Lead :)
"general composition of this song" - totally working on this
"Did you use a music scale for this " - no, I have no idea wtf im doing lol. I played guitar for like 15 yrs all by ear and im doing this all by ear. Ill keep this advice in mind
No - please always feel free to leave feedback, its helpful and super appreciated!
Not bad dude, might wanna change the Lead at some point. Sounds like a 2 minute buildup.
At the end I'm like "Hey where's the rest of the song ?" :P
Hope this review helps :)
Thanks for your review ;)
I was making this as dance loop, but I made so many different patterns, and well, you might feel this boring ;/
Well making the last part of it I was so busy studying, (I'm just a student.15 years old) and I left the end part with just a bell ring :P
Anyway thanks for reviewing!
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