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Merlow Unofficial Adventu Merlow Unofficial Adventu

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice action, a little bit chaotic but with sprites its hard to avoid it.

Very nice work on the effects btw :)

Next time I hope you make it longer.


ClideXIII responds:

Thank you. Yeah I want to avoid the craziness. The next animation will deff be longer and better and will be more than just a random battle and use a little more imagination. Thanks for the review!


The Universe Ep 1 The Universe Ep 1

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Nice work dude, I can definitely see a hint of Adventure Time animation style in there.

As you said the sound is a bit poop, but good poop :)

Keep it in mind when you do the next one :D


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Stefan KC - Peonies Stefan KC - Peonies

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Very Nice beat, definitely felt like getting up and dancing to this one :)


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HappyHype responds:

I am glad you like it :D


Fluorine Fluorine

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Ok a good start but you need to give more thought to the sound of the lead and the general composition of this song.

The lead gets a bit too high and tinny in places and really makes it hard to listen to. Maybe try adding some Reverb, Delay or Chorus. Or all 3 lol

Also the general feel of the song is that it's a little bit disjointed and repetitive in places. Did you use a music scale for this ? Like Major, Minor ect. My way of doing things is to play a little simple tune that I like and then create a scale from it and stick to it.

Sorry if this seems like I'm being a bit mean but I am honestly trying to help you take your music to the next level. It's a good effort just bear in mind what I said and try to be a bit more adventurous with your Lead :)


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devknob responds:

"general composition of this song" - totally working on this

"Did you use a music scale for this " - no, I have no idea wtf im doing lol. I played guitar for like 15 yrs all by ear and im doing this all by ear. Ill keep this advice in mind

No - please always feel free to leave feedback, its helpful and super appreciated!


#Technical Dancer# #Technical Dancer#

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad dude, might wanna change the Lead at some point. Sounds like a 2 minute buildup.

At the end I'm like "Hey where's the rest of the song ?" :P

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DJWiztic responds:

Thanks for your review ;)
I was making this as dance loop, but I made so many different patterns, and well, you might feel this boring ;/
Well making the last part of it I was so busy studying, (I'm just a student.15 years old) and I left the end part with just a bell ring :P

Anyway thanks for reviewing!