Nice action, a little bit chaotic but with sprites its hard to avoid it.

Very nice work on the effects btw :)

Next time I hope you make it longer.

Nice work dude, I can definitely see a hint of Adventure Time animation style in there.

As you said the sound is a bit poop, but good poop :)

Keep it in mind when you do the next one :D

Very Nice beat, definitely felt like getting up and dancing to this one :)

Ok a good start but you need to give more thought to the sound of the lead and the general composition of this song.

The lead gets a bit too high and tinny in places and really makes it hard to listen to. Maybe try adding some Reverb, Delay or Chorus. Or all 3 lol

Also the general feel of the song is that it's a little bit disjointed and repetitive in places. Did you use a music scale for this ? Like Major, Minor ect. My way of doing things is to play a little simple tune that I like and then create a scale from it and stick to it.

Sorry if this seems like I'm being a bit mean but I am honestly trying to help you take your music to the next level. It's a good effort just bear in mind what I said and try to be a bit more adventurous with your Lead :)

Not bad dude, might wanna change the Lead at some point. Sounds like a 2 minute buildup.

At the end I'm like "Hey where's the rest of the song ?" :P

Hope this review helps :)